I played your game and, in spite of looking kinda simple, I really enjoyed.
I just created this account to tell you (and also help you) about what bothers me the most: Grammar.
I know that you are not an english native speaker (neither am I). You are probably french, I see.
Well, some important tips:
When you use the auxiliary verb "did" (or "didn't"), the main verb does not need to be in the past.
example:
Wrong: I didn't thought about that
Correct: I didn't think about that
Other tip: "Thoses" doesn't exist. The word "those" is already plural of "that".
Singular: That person
Plural: Those persons
I understand your plural logic, my native language also came from Latin (romance language?).
Another tip: Some english adjectives end with ful and not full. The correct suffix is ful. It is beautiful, thankful, grateful, and not beautifull, gratefull, thankfull.
hi dev can i ask u something ? could you give me a save file form the last update please ? my laptop broke and i neded to reinstall windows please it will mean so much :)
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Dear LeChroniqueur,
I played your game and, in spite of looking kinda simple, I really enjoyed.
I just created this account to tell you (and also help you) about what bothers me the most: Grammar.
I know that you are not an english native speaker (neither am I). You are probably french, I see.
Well, some important tips:
When you use the auxiliary verb "did" (or "didn't"), the main verb does not need to be in the past.
example:
Wrong: I didn't thought about that
Correct: I didn't think about that
Other tip: "Thoses" doesn't exist. The word "those" is already plural of "that".
Singular: That person
Plural: Those persons
I understand your plural logic, my native language also came from Latin (romance language?).
Another tip: Some english adjectives end with ful and not full. The correct suffix is ful. It is beautiful, thankful, grateful, and not beautifull, gratefull, thankfull.
I wish you success.
Hi thank you for the tips !
And I am also happy to hear that you liked the game ^^
hi dev can i ask u something ? could you give me a save file form the last update please ? my laptop broke and i neded to reinstall windows please it will mean so much :)
Hi, this is the first version of this game so there isn't any save file from the last update that I can give you sorry
oh ok i just paste this comment because a have so many games and i didnt remember wich is in her first version
Ok no problem ^^